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Ocil: Two Piece
« Thread started on: Jul 18th, 2007, 01:22am » |
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Ya Yo, Ya Yo! Two Piece! It's the name of the treasure in the Not-so Grand Line! Ya Yo, Set sail for Two Piece!
(For those who don't know, that's a parody of the Anime's opening rap thing. (I happen to like it.)
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"(I happen to like it.)" If I ever utter those words again, please, please shoot me in the head. I hate past me so much. He was so dumb.
Yeah, I needed to get N.A. Selio out of the parody for now, because otherwise, it would be over too quick. But it also establishes that the guys have to, once again, learn to work within the rules of a parody 'cept this time Author's stuck in it too. Don't worry though, they get better, the comics that is. Poor Zoru, he got drop kicked.
EDIT: Simply added the first two comics as an image to the post for the benefit of those who didn't see the original fancomic. Don't mind me. ~Vince
EDIT: Thank ye Vince, I was gonna do that too, but hey, you beat me to it, so I guess I don't have to.
EDIT: Added the Prologue Cover
EDIT (this is the last one, I swear): everything © It's respective owner/owners
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Pirates are evil? Marines are righteous? These terms have changed throughout history! The ones who rule are the ones at the top! We stand at the neutral point of that statement. Justice will prevail, you say? But of course it will!! Whoever wins this war...
BECOMES JUSTICE!! -Don Quixote Doflamingo
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Re: Ocil: Two Piece
« Reply #1 on: Jul 19th, 2007, 01:23am » |
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I really like this comic. Between the second panel and the sprites in the last panel, and Mav in the third panel, I had fun with it. I like "OH SNAP" as a sound effect. It makes me laugh. Uh-oh, Zoru ran off. What makes me laugh is I didn't plan that. It...just happened. That happens when I do stories, things I don't plan happen and they usually work out pretty well, so I hope that holds true here. Let's see Author's opinion on this series.
That's not me, that's Time Man. I don't have any author sprites, and have no intention of making any. So I have sprites that I've made that I'm proud of represent me. Here it is my 16-bit Time Man.
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Pirates are evil? Marines are righteous? These terms have changed throughout history! The ones who rule are the ones at the top! We stand at the neutral point of that statement. Justice will prevail, you say? But of course it will!! Whoever wins this war...
BECOMES JUSTICE!! -Don Quixote Doflamingo
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Re: Ocil: Two Piece
« Reply #2 on: Jul 20th, 2007, 01:16am » |
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Yay! Author gets a line! Well the Zoru running away thing has a purpose after all. This took me longer to think up than it should have. The sprites of Zoru in this comic were hard. Well, harder than I expected them to be anyway (except for the last panel). Anyone notice something different about this comic?
EDIT: Assume from now on, that there is a new update everyday. I will try to update daily, but make no promises.
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Pirates are evil? Marines are righteous? These terms have changed throughout history! The ones who rule are the ones at the top! We stand at the neutral point of that statement. Justice will prevail, you say? But of course it will!! Whoever wins this war...
BECOMES JUSTICE!! -Don Quixote Doflamingo
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Re: Ocil: Two Piece
« Reply #3 on: Jul 21st, 2007, 01:16am » |
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Chris made me do this joke. I didn't even want to do it. If you look really closely in the previous comic, you can see the Navy guys in the background, so you can't say that they just came out of nowhere. Trying something new with the text boxes. Does it look better? Worse? Can you even tell a difference? Let me know what you, the reader, think.
I also don't know when the next comic will be posted for sure, because I'm gonna try something new, and I don't know how long it'll take me to finish it.
EDIT: Added the Chapter 1 cover
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Pirates are evil? Marines are righteous? These terms have changed throughout history! The ones who rule are the ones at the top! We stand at the neutral point of that statement. Justice will prevail, you say? But of course it will!! Whoever wins this war...
BECOMES JUSTICE!! -Don Quixote Doflamingo
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Re: Ocil: Two Piece
« Reply #4 on: Jul 23rd, 2007, 02:39am » |
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Or don't say anything at all.... Jerks. 
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Pirates are evil? Marines are righteous? These terms have changed throughout history! The ones who rule are the ones at the top! We stand at the neutral point of that statement. Justice will prevail, you say? But of course it will!! Whoever wins this war...
BECOMES JUSTICE!! -Don Quixote Doflamingo
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Re: Ocil: Two Piece
« Reply #5 on: Jul 23rd, 2007, 09:22am » |
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Now you know how I felt when I was trying to get people to post in the forums at all. lol
As for the comics themselves, they're comin' along nicely. I like that one sprite of Zoru in the last panel of the most recent comic. lol
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Re: Ocil: Two Piece
« Reply #6 on: Jul 23rd, 2007, 11:46am » |
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Nice work gives
*ocil a cookie*
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Re: Ocil: Two Piece
« Reply #7 on: Jul 23rd, 2007, 5:32pm » |
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Ldr- I dislike you. A lot.
Here's the filler.
http://www.geocities.com/enkeromega2/Landon.wav
Copy and paste it into the address bar, don't just click it.
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Pirates are evil? Marines are righteous? These terms have changed throughout history! The ones who rule are the ones at the top! We stand at the neutral point of that statement. Justice will prevail, you say? But of course it will!! Whoever wins this war...
BECOMES JUSTICE!! -Don Quixote Doflamingo
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Re: Ocil: Two Piece
« Reply #8 on: Jul 23rd, 2007, 7:11pm » |
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...Were you... ...Were you drunk when recording this...? Or posting it? lol
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Re: Ocil: Two Piece
« Reply #9 on: Jul 23rd, 2007, 7:27pm » |
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Sadly Vince, no, I was not. That's just how I am.
Ok, here is the new comic enjoy everybody!
Quick story about the navy officer with green text. I wrote the scripts and wrote him in as "Navy Officer", well after a while I started to like him, so I gave him a name (It's Fred). And then I decided to give him colored text even though he's an extremely unimportant character.
With the new comic format, the focus is on the characters, not the background. Plus, look at all that text in panel 2, there's no way I could've fit that in the old comics. And you can see more of the details on the sprites.
I don't know if I'm authorized to give bonus points, but bonus points to whoever can get the reference Dante makes. Asta cannot get the points, because I know he gets it.
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Pirates are evil? Marines are righteous? These terms have changed throughout history! The ones who rule are the ones at the top! We stand at the neutral point of that statement. Justice will prevail, you say? But of course it will!! Whoever wins this war...
BECOMES JUSTICE!! -Don Quixote Doflamingo
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Re: Ocil: Two Piece
« Reply #10 on: Jul 24th, 2007, 05:44am » |
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Gah! I know that, but I can't remember what it's from! Gah!
I love the comics, mostly because I love One Peice.
If you don't know what a salt and glass cookie refers to, no worries. It's an inside joke from the El Goonish Shive forums.
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Re: Ocil: Two Piece
« Reply #11 on: Jul 24th, 2007, 09:02am » |
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"Asta cannot get the points because I know he gets it."
SON OF A BITCH! ANGRY ASTA IS ANGRY! RAAAAAAWWWWWWWWWWWR!
Bah. I don't need your spooty bonus points.
Additionally, I DO like the new format. Now, we can actually see the detai in the sprites. It was really hard to before.
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Re: Ocil: Two Piece
« Reply #12 on: Jul 24th, 2007, 1:04pm » |
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you DO realize smoker is a high-ranking and respected naval officer who wouldn't be arrested.....right?
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Re: Ocil: Two Piece
« Reply #13 on: Jul 24th, 2007, 1:18pm » |
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Maybe in the One Piece universe, but not the Two Piece universe.
You do realize I don't care...right?
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Pirates are evil? Marines are righteous? These terms have changed throughout history! The ones who rule are the ones at the top! We stand at the neutral point of that statement. Justice will prevail, you say? But of course it will!! Whoever wins this war...
BECOMES JUSTICE!! -Don Quixote Doflamingo
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Re: Ocil: Two Piece
« Reply #14 on: Jul 24th, 2007, 4:55pm » |
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I'm guessing that EVERYONE despises Recolors in the Parody dimensions. It's just that only the Navy recognizes Author as a recolor because he's not shouting about trying to capture Straw Hat.
I imagine Ocil saying the following right about now:
"NOT. FUNNY."
Oh but it is, Ocil. Oh but it is.
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